Thriller Rough cut

Please bear in mind....
we have no soundtrack.
we need to do titles.
we still need to film more footage
and we haven't arranged clips or done any editing.
Thank you and goodnight.

In today's lesson all other groups viewed our rough cut and this is some of the feedback we received...

STRENGTHS:

• Good variation of cinamatography
• The low angle shot was well thought out
• Good use of props
• Good use of close ups
• Good setting and scenary
• Looks like it would be good when finished

WEAKNESSES:

• No audio
• Un-clear narrative
• no titles
• no sound
• unsure of what is happening
• clips move too fast
• need parallel editing.

We're soon going to make an action plan...